jueves, 14 de agosto de 2014

Paragraphs and topic sentences

The Topic Sentence Paragraph
Any essay must have several good Topic Sentence Paragraphs; it is these paragraphs that allow you, the writer, to focus and define the reader's attention to the particular message or unit of information that you want the reader to think about. In addition, the Topic Sentence Paragraph provides your reader with that all important sense of value . This comes from the substance of that particular message you are communicating. To do this effectively, it is important that one be aware of certain guiding principles with respect to exactly where the Topic Sentence can or should be placed in a Topic Sentence Paragraph.
The Topic Sentence can go in any one of three (3) places in a paragraph:
1.     At the beginning (a form of Deductive Order , that is, going from the General or Main Idea to the Specific Support Sentences of that Main Idea in your organizing the paragraph);
2.     At the end (a form of Inductive Order , that is, going from Specific Supporting Sentences that provides examples, details, illurations, statistics, and other forms of information to the General or Main Idea); or
3.     Nowhere -- it's just "understood" (this is only done when you believe that the reader will know the main idea in the paragraph without being told and doing so renders your paragraph artificial and stiff. But please understand the difference between a paragraph with an implied or understood topic sentence and a paragraph that is simply a collection of unconnected, unrelated sentences!).
In writing Topic Sentence Paragraphs, you want to always make certain that (1) you tell the reader clearly what the paragraph is about; (2) you make certain that every sentence in the Topic Sentence Paragraph is related to the Topic Sentence, even if it is "implied;" and (3) that you always give your reader enough information to cognate your message. This final admonition is especially important given that the Topic Sentence Paragraph is the smallest unit of writing in which one can disseminate a complete message.


Methods for Adding Information to Topic Sentence Paragraphs
There are several ways by which one can insure that your Topic Sentence Paragraphs are, in fact, giving the reader enough information to understand your message.
1.     Illustrations, Examples, and Details. Your textbooks are excellent references for this type of writing. You may choose virtually any section of a textbook to find where the author, following an overview or Introduction to the subject matter, then follows with illustrations and examples for the readers to follow.
2.     Description. This particular method for adding information is certain to get the reader directly involved as it appeals to the five senses. When one uses description, it is usually to answer questions for the reader such as "What did it sound like?" "What did it smell like?" In describing, the writer works to develop word pictures, to image the scene for the reader whether it be an object, person, or event.

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  1. Modern technology is here to stay.

    It would be almost impossible to ignore computer-based system or to return to working without them. However, successful use of ICT requires investment in both equipment and skills. Businesses of all sizes need to make the right choices because there are risks, as well as benefits, involved.

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  2. ICT plays a key role in business today. (William Rodríguez)

    In fact, its use is now so widespread that it is difficult to succeed without it. Rapid
    developments in the ICT sector in the last two decades have produced a huge range of new products and services. These include products such as personal computers (PCs), notebooks and fax machines, and services such as e-mail, intranet and the Internet. Businesses of all sizes and types use computer-based systems like these because they offer a better way to work – one which can
    save time and money. (Merce Escalante)

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  3. Another area where ICT is important is the retail industry. (Valeria Castillo)

    Most items on sale in shops have a small black and white label called a bar code. Many shops combine bar-coding with electronic point-of-sale (EPOS) systems. The customer takes an item to the cashier, who uses a scanning device to read the bar code and find out the price of the item. The EPOS system logs each sale and helps the shop manager to decide which products to reorder from the supplier. Some EPOS systems are even programmed to do the ordering. (Esteban Carmona)

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  4. ICT systems can be very expensive. Companies have to choose systems which suit their need and are cost-effective before investing in ICT. They have to consider several factors. Firstly technology is constantly developing, which means that systems need to be regularly upgraded. Another issue is staff training. There is no point installing an ICT system if workers cannot use it. Lastly, there is the cost of technical support, such as a helpdesk, to ensure that everything runs well on a daily bases. ( Marianne )

    However, it is important to understand that there are costs as will as benefits (Leandro Ulloa)

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    Respuestas
    1. At the design stage, they use computer-aided design (CAD) software to produce new ideas and designs. In the production stage, many companies use robots. These are machines that do the work of people, and are controlled by computer-assisted manufacturing (CAM) programs. Robots can carry out routine, complex and dangerous procedures. They can work 24 hours a day and the standard of their work remains constant because they do not get tired or bored. As a result, companies can improve their production rates without losing quality (Felipe)

      Manufactures use new technology to design and build products.

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  5. ICT is also used to input, store and manage information

    Firstly, it saves time. Task that once took a long time to do by hand now take a fraction of that time. Secondly, ICT improves communication between people, speeding up business transactions and decision-making, and opening up new markets around the world. Thirdly, inexpensive ICT solutions can often replace expensive people. Consequently, companies can reduce the size of their workforce and their wage bills. Finally, ICT can increase the quantity and improve the quality of goods produced, which may also increase profit.

    Carlos B, Jurgen A, Acsa H

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  6. Firstly, ICT is a faster and more efficient way for people to communicate. (Shuying)

    Businesses no longer have to rely on slow postal services. They can send and receive information and documents by text, e-mail or fax. Video-conferencing means that people do not need to travel long distances to attend meetings. ICT provides a way for people within an organization to contact each other quickly and share work. It also means that they can work with people around the world. (Jose RC)

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