viernes, 31 de octubre de 2014

Describing Places

Place here your compositions of the place you described.

6 comentarios:

  1. The ideal bedroom
    We are going to describe our ideal bedroom. This place has many characteristics. For example, the bedroom should be a big space, which should be in front of the sea. In our bedroom we want to have a big window to appreciate the paradise. Also, in our bedroom you will find a queen bed with a beautiful blanket. Also, we will have soft pillows on the bed. In the bedroom, we want to have our own bathroom with a bath. Also, we want to have a big closet, where we are going to put all our clothes and shoes. Next to the closet, we are going to put a big mirror. We want to put a picture above the bed. On the right of bed, we need to have a lamp. On a corner of the bedroom, we want to have a desk with our computer and books. Finally, we are going to have a fan in the middle of the ceiling. These are some things that we need in our ideal bedroom.

    Students:
    Roxana Gómez Gómez
    Gloriana Molina Tenorio
    Jesús Pereira Quirós
    Deivid Stiven Segura Romero
    Ernesto Soto Granados

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    1. Hi people. I recommend not to use so many "also". Instead, you can use "moreover, in addition or any other linking word with a similar meaning"
      ...On the right of the bed...
      Well done!

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  2. Institute Technology of Costa Rica.
    TEC is a beautiful place to study because it has different green places. This University has many buildings for example: the Business Administration School is next to the book store, and the institute restaurant is between cafeteria and forecourt. The TEC´s students can have some benefits as student dorms, which are in the University. Also the gym that is next to the Art´s Center. In the TEC is other small businesses, as Ban Credito is in front of lake. TEC is a good option for study because is a university big with many options for studying and other options to be entertained, some facilities such as restaurants, libraries and book store among other things more. Finally, TEC is located in strategic point of Cartago, to the left of “Basilica de Los Angeles" and behind the Wal-Mart.

    Students:
    Randall Álvarez
    Evelyn Chacon
    María Dinarte
    Yuliana Gamboa
    Yessenia Navarro

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    1. Hi people. Here are some recommendations
      ....shool which is next to the bookstore...
      ...between the cafeteria and the forecourt.
      In the TEC, there is another small business such as the BanCredito which is infront of the lake.
      The TEC is a good option for studying, because it is a big university with many options for majoring...
      ... among other more things.
      Finally, this university is located in a strategic point ... of the Basilica de los Angeles...
      You need to pay attention to these relevant points in your writing.

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  3. The Beach

    We think the beach is a beautiful place, because you can enjoy with your friends and family. If you go to the beach, you will do many activities, for example: play soccer, volleyball, swim, surf, walk, run and dive. Also, if you want to make other things, you will visit parks.

    Costa Rica has many beaches, for example: Jacó, Tambor, Ballena, Cahuita, Manzanillo, Manuel Antonio, Puerto Viejo, Punta Leona and others.

    Our recommendation is Manuel Antonio beach, because it combination between mountain and beach is perfect to relax. Manuel Antonio has amazing hotels and extreme adventures.

    For this reason we think this beach is the best, if you want to go to enjoy with your family and have extreme adventures.

    Made by Katherine Miranda, Kevin Jiménez, Steven Flores, Osvaldo Ulloa and Anthony Nájera.

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    1. Hi people.
      These are the recommendations:
      ...because it is a combination... which is perfect to relax.
      Well done!

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