domingo, 29 de mayo de 2016

A Scary Experience



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  1. It was a cold, dark night


    Last year during the month of May, I had nothing to do, so I decided to invite my nephews and nieces, to make a sleepover. They are Sebastian , Rachell , Jorge Andrés and Ariana. We were very excited. We buy popcorn and soda, to see a horror movie.
    This film really struck me a lot. I was really scared. When we had to sleep, I couldn’t and when I closed my eyes had all the scenes from the movie in my mind.
    A moment later , I could sleep and in that instant began my nightmare. My nightmare was that I was driving my car in a forest, during a cold and dark night. There was a lot of rain and couldn’t see the road. At that time a tree fell and I could not continue my way. I decided to call my dad to come and help me. But the cell was discharged. So I put on my coat and left of my car to get help. When I was walking, thunders were falling. So I was really scared and preferred to return me to my car.
    When I reached the car, I felt someone in my car. I felt very scared and wanted to cry. When suddenly I look in the mirror and saw a man dressed in black. Who told me, shut up because you will die.
    I was shaking a lot and couldn’t speak. The man wanted my car and take my money. I tried to defend myself but he was very strong. He was very angry and showed me a gun. While I cried and asked for help desperately.
    Just in this momento, my nephew Sebastian woke me. Because I shouted very ugly. My heart was pounding and I was sweating a lot.
    Every day I remember this ugly experience and I always have the hope of not having a horrible dream again . From that moment I decided not to watch scary movies never more. With this decision I can be feel calm, quiet and can rest.


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  2. It was a cold, dark night



    It is a cold December night, It was raining a lot during the day, when the clock struck five p.m. began to have lightning, which they caused that had little power cuts, During the storm at home everything continued normally, mom Adriana preparing the food for dinner, Julian Santiago and Valentina children were watching television and father Alberto was doing some repairs to the kitchen, so Adriana cook food.
    Alberto needed to leave the house and go to the hardware store to buy a replacement for the kitchen.
    The hardware was in the center of the city and they lived 20 minutes in a very quiet neighborhood , but that would not be a quiet day as he had escaped from prison the most ruthless murderer that the city could know, he and called himself " cut face ".
    Alberto decided to go for the replacement of the kitchen to the city , the road was complicated because the rain could not see clearly , It took about 5 minutes when Alberto run over someone who went through on the road , he got out of the vehicle to verify and ask for help , to his surprise he had run over a small cow pasture near, Alberto felt sorry but decided to follow, when a man grabbed him by the back entered his car , he was the murderer who had escaped from prison , which we suffocating causing his loss of consciousness , when he felt that faded and everything was over, he felt a strong blow to the face and in the struggle with the murderer took a turn , which caused him to fall from his chair and was when he realized it had all been a dream, which was not in danger that there was no murderer had simply fallen asleep watching the news , which told the story of a murderer , Alberto laughed and decided to turn off the TV .

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  4. It was a cold, dark night
    Exactly one year ago on a trip to the field, we were in the house of a guy named Mario in Sarapiqui; my older brothers and me. It was 2 in the morning when the dogs were heard very angry, scared and so we got up, then the dogs calmed down, And we hear a hit on the door, then pointed it to us with a gun and they tied us all three together, while stealing everything they wanted from the house though my brothers are tall and strong, they could not defend themselves against death threats while we were aiming several guns. The assailants were skinny, tall, dark, but with masked men. My uncle came in his car while the assailants were in the house and watch something strange inside, so they called the police, then the police arrived the robbers fled and my uncle followed them in his car but the assailants were faster and until they came to shoot, and although the police also followed not managed to capture and fled through the woods, Over time they captured and identified by a tattoo that one of them had framed on the forearm and discovered he was a murderer and that he had killed 3 people in other rounds.

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  5. It was a cold, dark night
    One year ago, my friends and I went to camp to Prusia. A group of three boys and a girl who just wanted to camp and have a great time. We sneaked through the trails and the crops fields because people is not allowed to camp in that park. When we were getting in, it started to rain heavily. It was a cold, dark night. Unfortunately, the tent was broken and we could not cook the little of food we had. We were trying to sleep and could hear the wolves howling in the deepness of the mountain. The cold was really hard to feel and I was scared. There was the feeling of something telling us that we should not be there. At midnight, the stormy night was freezing us, so we decided to go home. We did not want anybody to get hypothermia. We went down the trails right to the exit. While we were getting out of there, the guards’ dogs started barking. The lights of the house in which they stayed, were turned on and we saw the lights of their flashlights. They were coming, it was time to run. We ran and passed through the fences. We heard a car coming towards us and kept running down. At one moment, my sleeping bag felt off from my bag pack and I was so scared, that I shouted when I felt it. We were running and heard a dog scream with pain. Something wicked was happening, we thought. We reached a friend’s house and hide there. We saw the men drive by the front street. He gave us food and dry clothes. Then, I realized that I had cows poop all over my sweater. It got stucked when we passed by the fences. They all laugh about me. We were not scared any more.
    The next day, we sadly realized that the dog was barking painfully because it was hit by the guards’ car. The dog dyied and we went there to help them to bury it. Even do, they never realized that we were the kids who scapped from them that last night. Everything was laughter at the end.
    Marco González H.

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  6. It was a cold and dark night when my parents decided to go out last year. Also, I had to study that night, that´s why I had to stay home alone.
    I was studying and suddenly at 7:47 pm, it began to thunder and rain heavily, it was a storm. At that moment, the light turned off and I had to wait 3 minutes to get it back. At the same time, I heard a baby crying twice, I was really scared. However, I continued studying and I tried not to pay attention to those things. After that, at 8:50 pm a baby was crying again but it was stronger and there was a noisy knock on the door. It was weird because I didn´t hear anything else for a while.
    Before that, at 10:00 pm my parents called to inform that they were coming back home. Immediately, the light turned off and I heard the baby crying again, 5 minutes later the light came back. Nevertheless, there was a shadow walking around the living room and a cold breeze came throwing books from the table. I was so nervous because it was strange and completely new for me.
    After that, my parents arrived and I told them exactly what had happened. Unfortunately, they did not trust me but when I finished telling them about it, an icy breeze came and we heard the baby crying hard. My parents were pale and they saw that everything I said was true.
    Finally, they trust me and they apologize because they did not support me. Then, it was time to go bed but we were still scared, so we decided to pray before going to bed. As a conclusion, that was a very difficult and horrific night, thanks God we were all together at the end that night.

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  7. It was a cold, dark night

    My horror story begins with the movie "The Conjuring" in July 2013. I went to the cinema at ten p.m. with my coworkers, Ingrid and Lisman, and my younger sister Paula. They and I were the only brave to see this film that was paranormal activities. Then, we left the mall dead of fear and not so brave. After my way home, we commented on the chilling scenes. Also, we made jokes, not thinking it would come true in my nightmare.

    It was a cold, dark night; Lisman was driving a very old truck by a lone wagon to my house. The mirror showed us a motorcycle with a tall and muscular man. Simultaneously, my sister Paula shouted accelerate the van because we were going to kill and Ingrid shouted that the man had a gun. I felt my heart pounding and I was gasping for air. Because, the motorcyclist took us to the haunted house that appeared in "The Conjuring". Then, I was alone in the van. At this time, my coworkers and my sister were tied in a chair in the yard. Suddenly, the murderer was in the back seat trying to catch me. The murderer was offering us ghosts to frighten him to stop him. I got out of the truck and started running toward the woods. The forest was dark and voices of people crying are heard.
    Then, I ran like fifteen minutes and stopped breathing. At the time, I felt touched my shoulder and when I turned around, it was my sister converted in ghost. Immediately, I woke up and saw the time on the clock in my room and marked the 3:07 PM. The same time, where the ghosts frightened the family in la movie. I put the blanket on my head and I began to pray. I vowed never to see this movie, but now I'm waiting for "The Conjuring 2 ".

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  8. It was a cold, dark night.

    A year ago, a friend came to visit to me and my roommates to residences that is where we live, it was a cold, dark night. While we are talking, we decided to go for a walk by the TEC, we went across the lake, and then decided to go down a path that is far down, everything went very well despite the cold.

    We are enjoying the walk, we were far away, when suddenly we heard a shot very close to us, we were very scared, and our hearts were beating very strong, we thought they wanted to kill us. After that we started running as a vehicle wines coming toward us, one could see the lights very frightening.

    Another shot was heard and then we decided to hide among some bushes that were there, after the car came in front of us and was a patrol of the TEC, the guard shouted us to get out and who we were.

    We explained we were students of TEC and lived in residences and we just wanted to walk. The guard scolded us because we are all without permission and was very late, but not reported to us and told us that we don't return to do this.

    When we are returning with less frightened, our other friend told us that he dropped a cell phone and had to go back for it, hoping the guard would not return us to see, finally we returned to home and we laughed a lot.

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  9. The night we went back to birth.
    It was a rainy afternoon in January, I remember it had rained hard all week. The night it happened, I remember that my aunt had invited us to eat at home, which was located in the mountains of Escazu, with roads by themselves without homes in many kilometers. My aunt called my mother to ask, if we were all going to go your home, but my mother told him that only three of the four, because my sister was sick and could not go. Although my father did not want to go, my mother forced him to go. I remember the thunders made of very dark night. We left home at 7 pm. When my father was driving he realized that a car was following us several minutes, he decided to accelerate to lose sight, and we thought we'd lost. When we were on the way to my aunt's house, homeless near or neighbors, we saw that we were following yet. My father accelerates the car again, but with the bad luck that broke one of the wheels of the car with a branch that had fallen on the road, the strange car stopped and left the same a man with a gun, my father puts secure to the doors. He broken the car windows with gun, hitting my father on one arm, my frightened mother shouted as he dialed 911 for help, but did not sign. I was very surprised, the guy opens the car door, tells us to go down, you want to take the car, if we resistance will kill us all, as he had killed all the others who had previously assaulted. All very scared we got off the car. He man took the car. After, many hours in the rain pass. A gentleman took us to my aunt's house. Where we called the police to bring the complaint. Fortunately, we were the only people who do not kill the murderer. We were very lucky.

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  10. It is said that there is a highway to Siquirres, where some rather strange events occur. And most shocking is that in recent months more than 10 people have died there. And no one knows the exact reason why they die. No one had noticed this circumstance had not given importance until it has produced the testimony of Mr. Juan, this man tells a shocking event that has caused impact and that has made the facts are investigated.
    Mr. Mora lives in a villa located on the road above. From this fact we conclude that knows perfectly. One night driving back home from work. It was with great caution because in a very little atmosphere reigned own very thick fog that area. I had never seen such a dense fog ever. And suddenly, I had to make a sudden stop. He found himself at a crossroads on the road, but a cross that had never seen. He had 10 years living in the place, spending two or three times a day there and neck had seen that way.
    He resumed the journey with a sense of great surprise, he doubted whether he had actually seen a cross or was it just your imagination. It could have been an effect of the moon in a fog ... but I was sure there was a way.
    The next day he returned along the same path, the direction of the work, and going through the same point a chill ran through her body: there was no way there. In that place there was only one embankment 4 meters high. At that moment he realized that if he had taken the road would have fallen for him and he would headlong. Because we knew the way he did not take it.
    The event had left him very confused and told some friends to get to work. Everyone laughed, mocked him, but one that paled instantly: I had heard of this road, in the history of a path that appeared suddenly in a night of heavy fog, but I never believed her. Now everything seemed clear. Everything was true.
    They have been investigating since on that road has killed more than 10 people precipitous, but the worst is that it is not the only case in the country. There are many accidents at night strangely dense fog; however, everyone in town wondering ¿is it coincidence or is there more ghosts roads?

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  11. It was a cold and dark night
    Somewhere away from Costa Rica, started late at night the cult of tranquility and silence of a thick darkness that covers the whole sky, where the moon is the guardian of the night horizon.
    In the serenity of this event, I was at midnight lying in bed and thinking about the possibilities of a bright future, was at that moment that the cold and the silhouettes of the room made me pay attention to something I wanted to skip and forget.
    Have you ever felt someone watching you? What someone runs his eyes languidly all your soul calm, quietly, while your chances are absorbed by the time, uncertainty and fear of what lurks may not be palpable?
    A cold air catches my neck and paralyzed me in the middle of the night. The whole atmosphere feels heavy and time escapes slowly as the room is reduced to that silhouette that is in front of you and feeds your fear.
    It’s precisely the fear that these silhouettes are fed, the fear of the unknown and the anguish of not controlling the situation is what makes you wait in the middle of the night and especially at dawn, these silhouettes appear at the corners of your room to claim all the pain and anguish that you have inside.
    Don’t forget that night of anguish is the most preferred for the silhouettes, enigmatic and bizarre figures who want to claim your biggest fears.

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  12. It was a cold, dark night

    Three years ago, in October 31th, it happened a scary something. I was sleeping, but woke up quickly. It was a dark night, it was a rainy so much, there were ray. I was in the mountain house, but only me, my family were not there. I was scared and didn`t find my family. After, the electricity turned off, there for, yelled. Then, I was hearing voices, I was very worried, I hearted a loud something in the second floor, I walked slowly for the stairs and I found a demon¡¡, it was black and had white eyes, it had many colors in the face. He locked me after for all the house, I wanted to kill me. While I ran, I saw the light near me, I ran there. I couldn`t see and passed out. After, I listened my mom`s voice. Finally, everything was a dream and I was happy to know it¡¡

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  13. It was a cold dark night
    This story should not be told; however, is a story everyone should know…
    It was a cold dark night when Martha heard a noise. She thought about going out and looking for the source of this sound, but she did not. Her heart was beating fast, cold water was running on her hands and back. When she calmed down, Martha decided to open the door but as she was opening the door a dark shadow appear and she lost consciousness. In the morning, Martha woke up on her bed, which was weird because she remember fainting the night before, she though it was a very vivid nightmare, but then she saw a note. She moved to where the note was and she started to read it slowly and carefully. “The wolf puff and puff until the house was down”. She decided to ignore the note and continue with her life.
    In the afternoon of the same day, on her usual way home a dark car was following her, for a moment she thought everything was a coincidence, but when she saw that it was not she started to run. As she was running, a bullet went through Martha’s stomach. Everyone around her started screaming. There was Martha, lying on the floor, dying. She started to remember what her mother used to tell her: “Martha, follow your dreams. Martha be a humble and good person”. If her mother were alive, she could not been proud of her. She was ambitious, materialist, and a bad person.
    Antonio, she remember… that passionate love that moved her from head to toe, her curse. If she would have being away from him, how could live have been? That is a question she never get because this was her reality. Before dying, she heard a voice: “This is what you deserve, witch” said Antonio’s brother. The brother of the man whom I killed for money. Water was running down her cheeks. Slowly, dying as she was thinking that for some reason she deserved it, karma was returning her debt, and it was her time to pay for her crimes.

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  14. It was a cold, dark night.

    I remember about five years ago when I was in my house with my sisters Ivania and Yeimi, they are less fearful than me. It was midnight, we were all alone at home, while we were sleeping, we heard a noise in the kitchen, were the spoons that had fallen from the cupboard and they were all on the floor, we wonder how that was possible? If the cupboard is at a high level relative to the ground.
    My sisters and I picked spoons and we realized that the cupboard was destroyed by a bullet shotgun, so we are seeing back and had seen a tall and burly man with a shotgun in one hand and the body of a dead woman in his other hand. The man put the woman in the trunk of a car, but he could not close the trunk completely, so the bloodied hand of the woman came out of the car and the man to leave the place driving the car, it left a blood mark in the path. My sisters and I called the police, but also decided to go on the trail of blood, so we took a bicycle and got to where was the car parked near a river. When we are near the river, we saw the woman's body floating in the water and on the shore of river man's body lifeless and with him his shotgun was. At the end we realized that the man had murdered his own wife behind our house, and he killed himself for what he did to the riverside. It was the worst and most frightening experience of my life. But thank God the man never noticed our presence, because we would have probably killed.

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  15. It was a cold, dark night

    A friend of my older brother, not long ago told us a scary experience that he went through. It was about two years ago, in the year 2014 on a cold and dark night at San Pablo, Heredia.

    He went on his honey moon with his wife. They were a young and happy recently married couple. After, a two week’s vacation they were heading back home. It was a nice house with a big backyard. But, the problem was that when they were building the house they run out of money to build a wall or fence to protect the house.

    Continuing with the story, they arrived at their house at nine o'clock. But, something wasn't just right. Because they saw some men hiding at the house entrance. First, the husband thought it was only some friends of him fooling around. So, he decided to enter his house to tell them to stop joking. But, the story has a rough twist. When the husband and his wife enter the house, four robbers grab them violently to tie them. After that, they submit them to give them what they wanted. They were four robbers, one was the leader and the other three just follow his orders. This three ones were wearing masks. But, the leader wasn't. So, they could totally see his face and it was like he didn't care at all. He didn't show any emotions at all. It could be said, he was cold as ice. The robbers saw the opportunity to break into a lonely house and take advantage of it. First, the leader asked them that where was the money. The couple told him that by that time there wasn't any money left. Because, they spent it all building their house and on the honey moon. Yet, the leader insisted and told them that he know all their personal information. He said what their profession was, where they work, how much they earn, bank loans they had, etc. So, they were completely shocked. And again, the leader insisted and said that if they didn't told him where the money was, he was going to destroy their house. The couple was sad due to this consequence. So, the leader gave the order to search the entire house for money regardless of tearing down their home. After that, the leader came back to them and ask them for their credit cards. The couple felt afraid and vulnerable because the robbers were armed (the four). And, the robbers felt angry because they wanted cash and the couple didn't had none. Later on, the leader decided to follow them to an ATM. So, they could take out all the money of their credit cards. Two robbers stayed at the house and the leader along with the other robber go to the ATM in the same car as the couple to make sure they didn't escape. Out of nowhere a motorcycle started following the car. Later, the couple realized it was a partner of the robbers. When they arrive to the ATM machine, the couple took all the money out and gave it to the leader. So, the leader proceeded to give the money to the motorcyclist and he ran away with it to take it to the robbers hideout.

    Once that, they drove the couple back to their house and the robbers took all their belongings and put them in their car. We are talking about all the material things they had. Computers, TV's, kitchen, refrigerator, bicycles, as well as their clothes!!! They even stole the couple’s car!!! Finally, the robbers left the crime scene. Leaving them tied up, extremely afraid and with their hands empty. A tragic experience for them and a tragic story to be told.

    In conclusion, the insecurity in our country is raising. And, we has citizens need to organize to fight back crime and protect our families.

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  16. It was a cold, dark night.

    This is a scary story of five friends' group that they were to a mountain to settle in a small mountain chalet, because they were interested in this experience. Jorge, Oscar and Luis were fearful guys, on the other hand Gabriela was a brave person and Silvia was a relax person.

    That was a cold and dark night under a full moon and there were many unusual noises in that place. The group of friends realized that there was a stranger animal in the house, I guess they saw a weird shadow. Jorge, Oscar and Luis scared decided to get out from the house and after that they just ran. Some minutes later they were tired and they just walk through the path, however in the distance a car was following them. Oscar and Luis hid behind a tree, Jorge started to run, but the car following just to Jorge.

    Silvia and Gabriela was finding Jorge, Oscar and Luis. Silvia was walking while Gabriela was running, and then, Gabriela saw the car following to Jorge, she looked that the person of the car got out of the vehicle with a dagger, when she looked this, she started to follow the murderer. Oscar and Luis were looking behind the tree scared, they commented that there was a car in the path, the murderer probably got into the vehicle while they started to run, and also that the noises in the house were caused by the murderer.

    Gabriela attacked the murderer and then Jorge, Oscar and Luis did it as well. Then, they tied him and took him into custody to the police station.

    Mauricio Aleman - 200922396

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  17. It was a cold, dark night

    It was a cold and rainy Friday night in Siquirres, I was sheltered in the house and watching a movie, when suddenly my cousin Alejandro came and ask me to go with him by car to pick up my aunt who was in Guapiles, because it was raining a lot and he did not want to go alone. So, I said okay I'll go with you.
    When we was heading to Guapiles on Route 32, my cousin was trying to overtake a pickup car that was in front, but for our surprise the driver did not let us . When suddenly, my cousin tried to overtake him again, but while my cousin try to overtake him, we saw the driver and got scared because he had a mask on and we could not see his face. In addition, I saw that the pickup has covered plates and at that precise moment he hit our car.
    At that time, our car went off the road and crashed against a traffic signal, but the man of the other car also crashed, but with a restaurant called Chicken Pura Vida, that was on the side of the road.
    My cousin was fine and he was relaxed, but I was beaten, very frightened and in shock, because I did not understand what had happened, then my cousin called the traffic and the police, because what happened was very strange, but he did not want to see how was the man, because he was afraid that he was a bad person.
    In less than 10 minutes an ambulance, the traffic and patrol police came; they helped us and also helped the man. But we got the surprise that the man was a murderer who was running from the police five days ago and the officers told us that probably the murderer was trying to assault us after bumping our car. When we realized that, my cousin and I see each other and we were grateful to God for having helped to work out that, because we saw it as a miracle.
    Then, we saw that the murderer was handcuffed to the police car and the ambulance took us to the hospital in Guapiles, where we were waiting for my aunt to check that everything was fine. When my aunt saw us, he hugged us and told us, I know it was a tough night, but the important thing is that we're all fine.

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  19.  It was a cold, dark night

    It was May 13th when we were driving to our house; My mother was 34 years old, my dad 40 years old, my sisters were 9 and 12 years. it was around 12:30 am, we return from my cousin´s 15th birthday, Marcela, in Ciudad Cortes , when was on the road my sisters were sleeping and my mom was so tired, and so was my dad but he needed to drive; we were listening to quiet music. When suddenly we noticed that a car was just becoming behind us, but that was normal, at those times was very common to see tourists , because people travel to the beaches to watch the sunrise, but we did not give importance to it, when we were through the beach it became more strange because the car was still there, so my dad drove slowly, trying to avoid the car and make it go ahead us but it did no think in the same way. . Later when my mother got up, she ask about how much time was left to arrive .So we answered that we were almost there, but that we were a little scared because a car was following us. My mother was frightened and she could not sleep anymore. A few minutes later the car beeped trying to tell us to go faster, but my father refused because he want the car to go forward. When we were already arriving at the entrance of the house my father puts the directional lights, and for our surprise the car did it too making us felling freak at the situation.
    Arriving home, we realized that the car that was coming behind us disappeared in the darkness. It was a terrifying night, the only thing we thought was that they were going to rob or do some evil thing to us but for a miracle it disappeared or not, we never knew what had actually happened. Finally we got home my sisters continued slepping while we bathed us for going to the bed fresh after that nightmare.

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  20. It was a cold, dark night.
    This is a story about the terror of Ana. First, Ana and her friends went camping in an old house, in a mountain in Naranjo. Gabriel, Monica and Danny are friends of Ana, they are very happy people and they like the risk and dangerous games. They have an age of 17-22 years and they were excited to be in the middle of the mountain.
    These guys came to the old house and settled, noises and footsteps of a person walking on the roof were heard. Ana and Monica were very frightened, they were very afraid.
    Gabriel and Danny left the house and they saw on the ceiling and there was a man with a knife in his hand, Gabriel entered the house and decided to call Ana and Monica. Next, all decided to leave that place, ran through the woods and on the road they saw a car that followed them, they decided to go different roads, and now the car was following Danny.
    Ana had a car near the old house, she and Monica ran to the vehicle. Then they went for their friends. Ana was driving when a man went through, the man stopped the car and climbed into the vehicle, the man kidnapped the girls, and the man chased Danny and Gabriel, who were found in the mountains.
    Finally, the man took the four friends and killed three of them. This story was told for Ana, she lives traumatized by what happened to her and her friends.

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  22. It was a cold, dark night

    It was a dark and cold night near the Arenal Volcano, I was with my parents, my brother and my girlfriend in a hotel. The hotel had a frightening look like film and strange sounds were heard, but did not know. It was about 10 at night and we were alone at the hotel when suddenly the sound of a car entering the parking lot of the hotel was heard. We went out to see who it was and upon arrival there was no car. In the spacious parking was only our car and the hotel owner.

    We frightened gave back us to the fourth and after a while a car was heard again, but this time it was the car. My dad went alone to see who it was and strangely the car started to walk away, there was only one person inside. I went down to accompany my dad. In the place where it was parked that car was a well of blood, it scared us a lot. We called the police and before he reached the car passed in front of the hotel, but this time with two people inside and another bloodied.

    This is the strangest thing that has happened in my life, obviously after that we ran out of that place.

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    1. Well done Kevin:

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  23. It was a dark and cold night
    In a remote village of the capital, some friends decided to go to the beach, they were Carlos, Jeremy, Emanuel, Sofia and Angie. Carlos asked for the car to his father and left at 6:00 pm. They were very good people, but Emanuel practiced witchcraft and none of his friends knew.
    When all were on their way, the street was very lonely and suddenly began to get very cold; but all was well.
    When they had 2 hours of travel, the car began to be flawed and they had to stop in the middle of nowhere.
    Carlos began to check the car but it was very strange because there was nothing wrong. The others were in the car and were very afraid because it was very dark; when suddenly a cry of a very strong woman and Sofia and Angie started screaming in fear. Carlos will not mind scream and continued to review the car when Jeremy founded between suitcase of Emanuel a drawer that had a picture of a black woman. Jeremy was angry and told him that he was carrying that?
    Emanuel then told them that he practiced witchcraft and took months that woman appeared to him in his home and the only way to get rid of it was to bring that picture to the sea and put it in a bottle and throw it as far as he could.

    Women were very angry and when they saw from afar was a black body that was running, then Carlos ran and go into the car and sped to leave that place, but they knew that woman would follow them to the beach.
    Emanuel was also very scared and asked forgiveness for what had done and promised that never ever do it again.
    Finally they reached the beach and quickly put the photo in a bottle and shot very strong, when the strongest woman cry was heard, with that they were already quiet because they knew that was the end of the murderous woman.

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    1. Well done Alejandro.

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  25. The Young Love
    In a tiny city, ther were two boys were best friends, both had a crush on the same girl but they don't know about it
    One day these boys were in math classes and one of them named Peter decide to declare to this girl. The other boy named Thomas, felt frustated because he was jelous of Peter.
    After that, Thomas said to Peter that he likes the same girl.

    Peter was confused about the situation, he said to Thomas that he was in love of this girl since classes starts. Thomas replied Peter saying that he felt in love of her before him and that he deser to be with this girl, not he.
    So out of anger, tried to punch Peter in his face, but he avoid it.
    The principal stopped the fight, because he knew that if he doesn't interrupt it will be worst later.
    Both of them received a punishment, but in that moment they remembered and said that any girl will separated their friendship, that it is more stronger than simple pleasures.
    By Carlos Mathieu, Paula Sanchez and Stephanie Vega.
    Cartago's Scientific College.

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    1. Hi Carlos, Paila and Stepanie:
      Please pay attention to the following:
      There... who were best friends..., but they didn't know...
      ...he was in love with this girl.... classes started..
      ... he felt in love with her .... he deserves to be... not him; he tried...
      ...he didn't interrupt; it will...

      that no girl will separate...
      ... is stronger than...

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  26. Homicide at Christmas
    On Christmas day a woman killed the children that she care. All started months ago when this woman was arrived at the house to take care of the children of important business man, because he had a work trip.
    She was so beautiful and young, but at the same time she had a mental problem, her name was Nina.
    She believed in the house where ghosts and this ghosts wanted to take the children. A few days after seeing the ghosts for the first time, the other persons they work in the house, they told her about the previous nanny and her boyfriend, they committed suicide.
    Nina thought the ghosts in the house where the previous governess and her boyfriend.
    After several encounters with them, one day, the Christmas day, she looked the ghosts, but she didn´t know they were the children because she only saw the ghosts and she attacked them both in real she killed the children. The other maids were preparing all for Christmas dinner, but some minutes after a maid, hear screams and she arrived to the place and looked with horror the scene. Finally, this maid called the police, and now Nina is in a mental clinic.
    By Daniela Calvo y Ruth Ureña

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    1. ... that she took care of. ... when this woman arrived ... of an important...
      She believed that in the house were ghosts. the other persons who worked in the house told her about...
      Nina thought there were ghosts in the house...
      ... she saw the ghost, they heard screamed and they arrived.

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  27. All a sad story.
    Once upon a time, Samuel was in the highschool studying as always and he was in the break and the highschool was in admition process, but he didn't know that and suddenly a group of students came at the highschool and in that group there was a beautiful woman and he felt in love instantly and the woman's name was Maria Fernanda. She was blonde, she had BIG BIG eyes and a beautiful personality. The next year she entered to the highschool and Samuel felt in love again. He treated to make she feel in love with him but he couldn't. The weeks and months passed and nothing happened. He stayed in loved with her but she was not in love with him. A guy of her group started to like Fernanda and they had connection and a good relation and Samuel was jelous about it, eventually the guy asked Fernanda to be his girlfriend and she accepted and Samuel got sad. His situation was so bad because the experience of Samuel at the highschool was a little difficult and at the end he had to went out of the highschool with his broken heart.
    The End.
    By Samuel Arguedas and Joan Ulloa.

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      Please pay attention to these observations:
      ... to make her feel...
      ... had to go out...

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  28. Colegio Científico
    Maikell Salas y Jeferson Araya
    Story
    In the story we are to talk about David and Emily, and how they met one day while David work in strarbucks, she was the most beautiful woman that his eyes had seen enteretes, David fell in love while the woman buy your coffee and macarons, the next day David invited that beautiful lady to eat ice cream in the Pops, as the years passes by David and Emily married in the beach and in this momento they have two sons and they lifed very happily in China.

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    1. Hi Jefferson:
      Please pay attention to these observations:
      ... we will talk about.
      ... buy him a coffee
      ... in this momet... lived ...

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  30. Did you remember that ship that sank down in 2036? The ship was acrossing the Pacific Ocean, in a winter day. In that day, a warship from Korea attacked a ship fleet from USA, my comrades and me, were involved in that attack. Our ship sank down, and only 3 people got solved, including me. A few months later, a ship from Japan, rescued us. They told us, that in that attack many people in the world reacted with scary and USA was preparing for a new attack. Eventually the japanese gave us a ship to return to our homes. Almost nobody remembers that accident today

    Colegio Científico Cartago
    José Manuel Loria C.
    A. Joel Gomez A.

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  31. Hu José Manuel y Joel.
    Please pay attention to the following:
    ... was creossing the ...
    ... got saved

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